Okay, here it is:

focus

You come in and out of sight
with a subtle and moronic meaning
faster, the pace of the dark, encompassing
slower, the face of the night
I use to walk on four legs
blinded by malcontent, lobotomized
misplaced by melancholy
I hated it, the meaning I despised
I was lured with more understanding
I loved it, but the meaning I loathed
finding myself and the meaning
I fell through a hole, unclothed
Without chains I understood
still missing the irrelavent leg
you left it all and came into sight.

I couldnt understand what you want to show there but it flows good.

Hmm...It's really good..I like all the big words! :lol:
But to be serious..Mal, you're work is absoulotely wonderfully cryptic.
Everything flows so smoothly one minute, and the next, periceing the soul with words so brimming with meaning. I truly adore you're work!

Damn. I didn't think that anybody would like my work. I could understand if it is too confusing. Thanks a lot Mercy.

*Drools* im speachless!!! and trust me that never happens. Very well written, but like mercy, i don't know what you are trying to say!! please, you must post more!!!

Damien ~The Beautiful Stranger~

loved it, but i had to read it about 5 times. good work.

I would post more but I lost all my poetry a while back. Only one of them I can remember. It was called "The Meek Thought". I posted it a while ago. You must have missed it. I wrote "Focus" very recently. I will come up with more so don't worry.

As far as the meaning of the poem. Well, I like to make all my poetry confusing on purpose so it gets people to think. It's not that hard to decode. Try not to look at the poem as a whole. Look at it bit by bit and the meaning should unfold the more you try to understand.

You're welcome Mal..I'm sorry to hear that you're poetry got ruined..I can image how many great peices that must now be gone forever..
But I can't wait for more of you're work..
So in a way..You're poems are like riddles..=)
Wonderful, I always enjoy riddles, and I always will enjoy you're works!

Wow, such knowledge. I love your poem, you must post more of such wonderful works of writen art! au revoir.